Congratulations on making your first VN! I think you did a good job, I really like the art style with the sprites, and the music/ambience choice for the walking home segments was definitely creepy.
I think you conveyed some interesting story elements, and although there are parts where I felt the writing was lacking, and some of the narrative conclusions weren't satisfying, overall I love what you did to make this and I think you should keep making more visual novels and telling stories!
I just played the game and I think it's not bad for a first game. The art style is very nice and the plot is simple.
Though I do admit it might be a little annoying if users wanted to do a speedrun of the game and it exits the game window instead directing them to the main menu. Otherwise, it's actually decent.
aaaa thank you! and yeah i got other people telling me the same about the exit thingy. i will make sure to change it in future games :) thx for playing!
Top 5 ways this game unwillingly entered, at the very least, the subconscious of my house, among other things.
#5 Physically. I saw it happen.
#4 Astrally. This game traverses both the physical and astral worlds, and I do not know why. It feels as though it accesses the astral world exclusively to annoy me, because it immediately became a symbiont for my house, through the astral world.
#3 Soulfully. The soul present in this game seems to have vacated the game it was once in and has moved into my house. Everything in it is the exact same, save for any physical and astral differences, yet it now has a different soul, too. This has mainly affected plants but it applies to other things as well!
#2 Memories. I think you can understand how with all of this going on, it is hard for the house to forget about any of this at all! It is truly something new.
#1 Completely. All of these methods, working in tandem have resulted in a complete takeover of my house in enough meaningful aspects that I do not know if it can be undone, and I don't like it!
If that is your thing, buy this game, but for me, I'm out.
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Congratulations on making your first VN! I think you did a good job, I really like the art style with the sprites, and the music/ambience choice for the walking home segments was definitely creepy.
I think you conveyed some interesting story elements, and although there are parts where I felt the writing was lacking, and some of the narrative conclusions weren't satisfying, overall I love what you did to make this and I think you should keep making more visual novels and telling stories!
thank you so much and im so glad you liked it. yeah the writing is a little meh i may admit but i will make sure to improve thank you so much!
I just played the game and I think it's not bad for a first game. The art style is very nice and the plot is simple.
Though I do admit it might be a little annoying if users wanted to do a speedrun of the game and it exits the game window instead directing them to the main menu. Otherwise, it's actually decent.
aaaa thank you! and yeah i got other people telling me the same about the exit thingy. i will make sure to change it in future games :) thx for playing!
Top 5 ways this game unwillingly entered, at the very least, the subconscious of my house, among other things.
#5 Physically. I saw it happen.
#4 Astrally. This game traverses both the physical and astral worlds, and I do not know why. It feels as though it accesses the astral world exclusively to annoy me, because it immediately became a symbiont for my house, through the astral world.
#3 Soulfully. The soul present in this game seems to have vacated the game it was once in and has moved into my house. Everything in it is the exact same, save for any physical and astral differences, yet it now has a different soul, too. This has mainly affected plants but it applies to other things as well!
#2 Memories. I think you can understand how with all of this going on, it is hard for the house to forget about any of this at all! It is truly something new.
#1 Completely. All of these methods, working in tandem have resulted in a complete takeover of my house in enough meaningful aspects that I do not know if it can be undone, and I don't like it!
If that is your thing, buy this game, but for me, I'm out.
thank you for your kind comment!